tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4067726136660060073.post75287020438042321..comments2023-12-06T21:24:36.112-08:00Comments on A Little Drop: Nanoha Innocents Chapter 6AriteDrophttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14431052039970118079noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4067726136660060073.post-29987589290683472502016-03-22T00:34:58.002-07:002016-03-22T00:34:58.002-07:00Oh, good job on completing the first volume. And ...Oh, good job on completing the first volume. And once again, thank you for taking on this project.Takamachi-chinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02551097624436183998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4067726136660060073.post-34533842345896100752016-03-07T09:38:19.807-08:002016-03-07T09:38:19.807-08:00On page 3, shouldn't that be "all that wo...On page 3, shouldn't that be "all that worthless brother of mine is good for"?<br />On page 10, in the bottom left bubble that "else" doesn't belong there, but even without it the combination of "have to" and passive voice sounds really awkward.<br />Finally, that font on page 18 in the middle panel is terrible and you should feel terrible for using it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4067726136660060073.post-61376234116454794362016-03-07T08:07:45.447-08:002016-03-07T08:07:45.447-08:00pg 2, freind's house (friend)
pg 9, "who ...pg 2, freind's house (friend)<br />pg 9, "who main attacker and back" (I feel like a word is missing)<br />pg 12, awaitng (awaiting)mutopishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355982915692477368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4067726136660060073.post-92183196093425809192016-03-07T05:30:32.512-08:002016-03-07T05:30:32.512-08:00Awesome. I look forward to the Subaru master post....Awesome. I look forward to the Subaru master post. :PPrimeSonichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02157178976141086762noreply@blogger.com