wait, there is an error in pg 09 that is bottering me, "The mystery pair that's invading the in the area!"... "the in the area" part is missing something!
My only complaint about this series as a whole is that what with everyone being alive and plot-relevant at the same time, it tends to get -very- crowded. Just from INNOCENT, we have NanoFate and friends (including her sister), the Materials, Hayate and the Wolkenritter (plus Reinforce), the side characters from the labs... and with INNOCENTS adding the Numbers and Star team, that's already 15 new main characters to fit in a narrow space. Not to mention parents, family members...
Thanks for the new chapter!
ReplyDeletewait, there is an error in pg 09 that is bottering me, "The mystery pair that's invading the in the area!"... "the in the area" part is missing something!
ReplyDeleteThanks! That was quick...
ReplyDeleteThe protagonists were always the Materials. The author likes them most and reserves them the coolest parts/spots. They are the sempais in this.
ReplyDeleteIf you were ever in doubt, look into chapter 9 of InnocentS, page 16 ;) Poor Nanoha and Fate got MarySue-ed to the sidelines in this series.
My only complaint about this series as a whole is that what with everyone being alive and plot-relevant at the same time, it tends to get -very- crowded. Just from INNOCENT, we have NanoFate and friends (including her sister), the Materials, Hayate and the Wolkenritter (plus Reinforce), the side characters from the labs... and with INNOCENTS adding the Numbers and Star team, that's already 15 new main characters to fit in a narrow space. Not to mention parents, family members...
ReplyDeleteAnyway, we could've at least skipped the Vivids.