pg 26, "to go allin" should be "all in", needs a space.
Thanks for the new chapter! Can't wait to see if Vivio is from the future and related to Nanoha. XD
Vivio saw the movies so she should be able to tell that the Innocent Nanoha uses a movie jacket instead of the real TV1/ŤV2 type.Speaking of that though, kinda weird for Vivio to use the Nanoha robe instead of her body suit.
Make sense, since she's a "Holy type" and that's apparently their appearance in-game. And with that said, all of my yes.