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At long last, no more dancing around pronouns! (Well, almost. There's still a little bit more.) As I've mentioned many times, I really want to make a big post about the whole thing so everyone can roast me for not being completely faithful to source material and whatnot, but I think I'll wait until after Chapter Six.
I feel like I was really off with the text placement this time, but I'm not quite sure why. Let me know how bad it is on the comments.
I feel like I was really off with the text placement this time, but I'm not quite sure why. Let me know how bad it is on the comments.
Thanks for the new chapter! I didn't think there was any problem with the text.
ReplyDeleteThe great reveal! XD I love it.
ReplyDeleteYeah, can't say I'm surprised Subaru gets that a lot.
ReplyDeleteText placement aside, there's a couple of things you could have done better. There's a blank word bubble on page 6. The white text outline on page 19 looks too jagged, you should really blur that a bit with font sizes this large. And that typeface in the top left panel of page 20 is just terrible, never use that again!
ReplyDeleteEven for a card game spinoff, we see world domination plots.
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