With volume three coming out in a few weeks, I figured that I should at least go and finish up volume one. And here we are.
Volume two is up next. (Or I guess the extra story of volume two of INNOCENT, but that's still volume two.) As I mentioned in the credits page, I'm sure most of you reading this have already seen a page or two from that volume. It'll be here eventually!
As I've been saying all along, I want to make a dedicated post to all the things going on with the Subaru gender gag. It should be up by the end of the week.
In any case, until next time! Leave your comments below.
Awesome. I look forward to the Subaru master post. :P
ReplyDeletepg 2, freind's house (friend)
ReplyDeletepg 9, "who main attacker and back" (I feel like a word is missing)
pg 12, awaitng (awaiting)
On page 3, shouldn't that be "all that worthless brother of mine is good for"?
ReplyDeleteOn page 10, in the bottom left bubble that "else" doesn't belong there, but even without it the combination of "have to" and passive voice sounds really awkward.
Finally, that font on page 18 in the middle panel is terrible and you should feel terrible for using it.
Oh, good job on completing the first volume. And once again, thank you for taking on this project.
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