Thursday, February 11, 2016

Nanoha Innocents Chapter 5

It's finally time.

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At long last, no more dancing around pronouns! (Well, almost. There's still a little bit more.) As I've mentioned many times, I really want to make a big post about the whole thing so everyone can roast me for not being completely faithful to source material and whatnot, but I think I'll wait until after Chapter Six.

I feel like I was really off with the text placement this time, but I'm not quite sure why. Let me know how bad it is on the comments. 


  1. Thanks for the new chapter! I didn't think there was any problem with the text.

  2. Yeah, can't say I'm surprised Subaru gets that a lot.

  3. Text placement aside, there's a couple of things you could have done better. There's a blank word bubble on page 6. The white text outline on page 19 looks too jagged, you should really blur that a bit with font sizes this large. And that typeface in the top left panel of page 20 is just terrible, never use that again!

  4. Even for a card game spinoff, we see world domination plots.


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