Sunday, December 6, 2015

Nanoha Innocents Chapter 2

Teana, you may be a little too infatuated with this "boy."

So, after going through countless times, I'm pretty sure I got all the times I used "she" while referring to that blue-haired girl. (Which probably means there's still some there, unfortunately.)

It's a shorter chapter this time, which is kind of bad, since it took just as long to get out, but oh well.

Please remember to leave comments below! Really helps to know what works and what doesn't.


  1. Thanks for the chapter! I get a 'Not Found Error 404' when I click on the download link.

  2. on pg 14, middle-left panel there is a bit of raw text outside the balloon speech. wasnt sure if that was important.

  3. You misspelled Fräulein.